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Post by Sur Realis on Apr 16, 2008 22:51:06 GMT -6
Constructive criticism, please.
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Post by Joker The Royale on Apr 30, 2008 8:16:22 GMT -6
err...... It was a short story Shane would of been better if it was a little longer
;D
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Post by Sur Realis on Apr 30, 2008 12:42:03 GMT -6
I should smack you for that, Joker. Of course it's a short story. It is, well, SHORT. Get the idea? >->;
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Post by Joker The Royale on Apr 30, 2008 12:58:05 GMT -6
*dodges the smack* anywhoz, i was just saying that it should have a little more shit in it and it was fun to read i give you that, i was just doing what you asked.
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Post by Sur Realis on Apr 30, 2008 13:12:13 GMT -6
...No you weren't. Note I said 'constructive' criticism.
I don't see anything constructive about that.
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