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Post by Hiroshima on Jul 12, 2005 11:43:47 GMT -6
not that bad. short and sweet. =)
of course now i gotta write my own >.>
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Post by Kija on Jul 12, 2005 19:33:28 GMT -6
I like the story and how it ends, it is very nice. Although I do not think the chaotics would actually assault the bridge since they are limited to certain boundaries, which is one the things you must find out why as an investigator in the game. But even with that, it is still good, short, but good.
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Post by Sarm on Jul 12, 2005 20:15:32 GMT -6
...ah, whoops. I forgot about the chaotic boundary part. Sorry.  |
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Post by Hiroshima on Jul 12, 2005 20:16:01 GMT -6
they could be TrYING to break the barrier although unsuccesful. question. in a story could we say that the Chaotics break through that barrier?
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Post by Kija on Jul 12, 2005 20:19:35 GMT -6
For story purposes, you can make up anything you want. It could be a simple legend created out of fear, since the people have no real knowledge as to why they stay bounded, so many stories would be created out of this fear. I only was pointing that out to inform people who did not know that, but if you wish to the chaotics assaulting the bridge or town, you could.
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Post by Taterz on Jul 13, 2005 1:27:31 GMT -6
pretty cool...this somehow makes me want to help others =(
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Post by Hiroshima on Jul 13, 2005 12:42:33 GMT -6
bweh heh, time to make total destruction!
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