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Post by Kija on Jul 14, 2005 8:59:39 GMT -6
An interesting story, and I like how it is done. The way things are described and occur looks very nice. I am interested to see more about this mage.
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Post by Hiroshima on Jul 21, 2005 15:03:10 GMT -6
Everyone, dont forget to look in here, and my story, i will be adding on periodically.
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Post by Taterz on Jul 21, 2005 15:35:06 GMT -6
i like how i came off as arrogant  . more! |
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Post by iris on Jul 22, 2005 8:29:23 GMT -6
yay! i feel akward/special about being the mage! >>;
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Post by Axel Revolver on Jul 23, 2005 19:33:11 GMT -6
I feel pretty cocky in it.
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Post by Hiroshima on Jul 23, 2005 20:02:13 GMT -6
some attitudes im not sure of yet, i tried to keep them as nuetral as possible, Tats' is gonna remain arrogant though ;D
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Post by Bolt on Jul 25, 2005 7:16:33 GMT -6
Sounds like ya got a good picture of how I act at times >.>. Sometimes I envy mages even though I have my own XD
Nice story, I swear I'm gonna make some kind of book out of these stories after i get the author's premission to use them.
[NOTE]I am NOT some kind of author,as most of you can tell I barely know whats goin on at times[NOTE]
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Post by Kija on Sept 10, 2005 0:57:47 GMT -6
I like the first style you used more; the second post you did seemed more rushed and less polished and just not as good. Although your third post brings more promise and I do look forward to it.
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