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Post by Takahashi on Jul 17, 2005 23:24:50 GMT -6
I can't very well comment on my own story, but that's where the rest of you come in. So, comment as needed.
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Post by Kija on Jul 17, 2005 23:35:17 GMT -6
This is an amazing story, done very well. I remember reading it in the past as well, and I am glad to see you finally finishing it. I am looking forward to seeing the rest.
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Post by Taterz on Jul 21, 2005 5:08:37 GMT -6
mmm i like where this is heading, i wanna read more
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Post by Rowan on Jul 22, 2005 19:10:51 GMT -6
I really enjoyed it, the fighting was detailed and there was also foreshadowing as to his past and what happened to his clan, can't wait to learn what this power really is, a pseudo bio-vampirism maybe, and also who this woman is. Keep up the good work!
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Post by Takahashi on Dec 30, 2005 4:16:14 GMT -6
Another chapter joins the one made earlier on in the week. As a bit of a spoiler for those who haven't read either of them yet, let's just say that Vallatio is a bit of a prick.
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