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Post by Kija on Jul 19, 2005 2:06:27 GMT -6
It is interesting so far, but I wish you would format better it. Having correct spelling and grammar can make a story look much better, though it is not neccesary. I will be looking forward to your next entries.
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Post by bass on Jul 19, 2005 2:12:38 GMT -6
thank you, and i will be more carfull with spelling in future.
i'll make the next entry when i have something to write about
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Post by Taterz on Jul 21, 2005 5:11:25 GMT -6
interesting how you take the viewpoint as if you were playing the game. all i want to see is more bloodshed and action during the fights. for example, rigs2 began burning vampires could be something like "he began to create some arcane pentagram with his hands, and within seconds the enemies would burst into flames." thats just what i want to see, its up to you how to do it. i'd still like to see more  |
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