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Post by Kija on Jul 22, 2005 2:51:50 GMT -6
Great story so far; I like how you did the descriptions. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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Post by Bolt on Jul 25, 2005 6:50:52 GMT -6
can't wait to read more. sometimes i think i read too much.
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Post by Kain on Jul 28, 2005 0:01:13 GMT -6
I appreciate the comments, guys. I'm about to post Chapter 4, but I probably won't be able to update again until Monday or so; I'm going out of town Friday and won't be back for a couple of days. Just giving everyone the heads up, in case anyone was just anxiously awaiting the next installment of Unity (yeah, right).
On a side note, if there are any goofs in Chapter 4 that I didn't catch...well, it's late and I'm tired. -_-
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