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Post by Bolt on Mar 24, 2006 0:10:44 GMT -6
Not bad, not bad at all. Hassenites scare me, so I won't look one in the eye and disobey them xD
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Post by Kija on Apr 4, 2006 21:20:04 GMT -6
It is an interesting story so far. Although it seemed strange that a child would wander that from Hassen. It would actually take a long time to get to the ice caverns from Hassen with the way the world is scaled. You almost have to travel half of the continent.
"If one were to send cargo from the Port of Anara to the Kingdom (Castle) of Anara, it would take someone walking approximately 6 days of travel. The distance would be about 300 km." - Dagolar from a map of Skyre.
Based on that information, it would probably be around 1,680 kilometers and a travel time of 34 days from Hassen to the ice caverns.
I did not like how the king tried to have them killed. It seemed too forced into the story without much reason. I would have liked to see more reasoning why the king thinks he is too dangerous, from some sort of event or something else.
Besides these small annoyances, it is pretty good though. It will be interesting to learn more about how his powers and what it will lead to.
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