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Post by Bolt on Jan 2, 2006 1:20:29 GMT -6
Met if you read my story, I didn't mean to make you look like a drunk, but I had to do it to someone. And I took something I wrote and turn this into it. So don't think of anything until you've read it. I also might start some humor stories also. Just gotta wait and see!
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Post by Kija on Jan 2, 2006 21:28:34 GMT -6
It was a bit different than the other stories posted, but it was entertaining and sometimes funny; although, I think it could have some more descriptive actions.
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Post by Bolt on Jan 2, 2006 21:33:37 GMT -6
well, as you've seen in my pervious stories, i'm not really that good with the descriptive part. but i'm trying to get a little mroe creative too. THe humor stories might come after my next story project. Which happens to be something that might get the comminity involved.
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Post by Crazy Cloud on Jan 5, 2006 19:05:29 GMT -6
Looks pretty good so far. I think it needs more depth to it, english III in Highschool will help you out alot there... although i don't know if that's going to help you right this moment..
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Post by Bolt on Jan 6, 2006 17:08:39 GMT -6
I'm a Freshmen CC >.> so that won't happen for another year or so....god i hate being so damn good at English
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